Description-outline
Outline
MAIN IDEA
Who? Mavis
where? Nantai
When? This semester
BODY
1. Basic background information
from Tainan.
Lives in her aunt’s house now
studied in same school as I
2. Personal information
likes walking
wants to be a tour guide
an easygoing person
Has a nice personality
Her health is not very well
Get sick easily
3.My reactions to Mavis
She is a friendly person
We both like to go to nightmarket a lot
I think she should do more exercise to make her healthier
We can work together in the future because I want to be a tour guide, too.
Conclusion
It's so unbelievable that we were in the same school before but we didn’t know each other.
We have never talked to each other until we came to Nantai.
I am very glad and lucky to have a nice friend such as Mavis in Nantai.
posted by Emilylin @ 11:30 pm
2 Comments:
OK. You can go ahead to write your essay. Write more about Mavis' hobbies, opinions to the life, and so on. Check some grammatical mistales with me.
那句'Get sick easily可以改成Easily get sick比較好歐~~
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