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Mavis is my classmate in Nantai. We know each other this semester. She is from Tainan county. Now, she lives in her aunt's house in Tainan Yuon-kon. She and I were in same school before but we have never talked to each other.
Mavis is a friendly person and she has a nice personality. She is easygoing and talktive. I have never seen she got angry. She likes to listen to music and shopping. Mavis is very easy to get sick so she often goes walking in her free time. She would like to take some courses which about travel because she wants to be a tour guide in the future.
For me, Mavis is a very nice friend. We have the same hobbies and we have the same goal. Both of we like to go to nightmarkets. I want to be a tour guide, too. I think maybe we can choose some courses about travel together. I am a little worried about her health so I tell her to do more exercises. Because of her nice personality I think she can be a very good tour guide in he future.
It's so unbelievable that we were in the same school before but we didn’t know each other.We have never talked to each other until we came to Nantai. Now, I am very glad and lucky to have a good friend such as Mavis in Nantai. I think we will be good friends and good partner in our studies and our work.
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第1段裡面each other出面蠻多次的~如果改成we never talked before好像會比 we never talked to each other好一些ㄝ~
We have the same hobbies and we have the same goal. Both of we like to go to nightmarkets. 這兩句寫在一起看起來好像是說你們共同的目標就是去夜市
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