EmilyLin's Writing Class

Monday, December 25, 2006

Comparison and Contrast-outline(shopping in the departmant stores and in the internet)

Introduction:
To compare the advantages and disadvantage of shopping in the department stores and in the Internet.
Three main ideas: prices, fit or not, and touch and feel the products.
Body:
First, people must compare the prices and want to get the cheaper one.

Second, we are going to compare “fit or not”. It’s also very important for the consumers. It’s hard to make sure that the thing you want to buy is fit or not when you order something from the Internet. But, if you choose to shop in the department stores you can ask the clerk and try on it.

The last part we are going to talk is about touch and feel the products. It’s absolutely different between shopping in the department stores and in the Internet.
You can’ feel and touch the products which you want to buy from the Internet. But you can do that when you shop in the department stores.

Conclusion:
Both ways have advantages and disavantages. No matter which way you prefer, just remember to be a smart consumer!

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