EmilyLin's Writing Class

Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Rewrite sentences with weaker verb

1. Attractive people may have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people.

2. Economic sanctions are probably ineffective.

3. Acoording to this survey, it shows that alcohol can highly causes people to become violent.

4. Passive smoking can highly causes cancer.

5. Recycling could be the best solution to the waste disposal problem.

6. Physical exercise may reduce depression.

7. Deep tunnels may highly be safer and less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than the shallow tunnels.

8. Private schools could provide a better eduation than the public schools.

1 Comments:

Blogger plnieh said...

2. In some cases, economic sanctions are probably ineffective.

3. Acoording to this survey, alcohol can highly cause people to become violent.

4. Passive smoking can highly cause certain types of cancer.

7. Deep tunnels may highly be safer and less vulnerable to earthquake shaking than the shallow tunnels.

8. Private schools could provide a better eduation than the public schools.

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